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正確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
II 高分表達(dá)
除了在句式上長(zhǎng)短句相結(jié)合準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)外,朗閣海外考試研究中心建議新托福考生要使用一些特殊的句式,以使句型多樣化。句型多樣化也是作文得到高分的條件之一。除了我們之前經(jīng)常提到的高分句式,如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、狀語(yǔ)前置、插入語(yǔ)等,筆者還提出另外一個(gè)句式的多樣變化,即主語(yǔ)多樣化。下面筆者將列舉幾個(gè)句子概括介紹前面四種句型,而重點(diǎn)分析主語(yǔ)多樣化。
正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒裝句: Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定詞位于句首的倒裝。)
正常句: The internet provides people access to the latest information.
強(qiáng)調(diào)句: It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (強(qiáng)調(diào)the internet)
正常句: The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
狀語(yǔ)前置句: Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句: However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入語(yǔ): New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (連詞however做插入語(yǔ))
主語(yǔ)多樣
1. 她突然想到了一個(gè)主意。
She suddenly had an idea.
通常情況下,考生會(huì)馬上對(duì)這句話進(jìn)行翻譯,基本不會(huì)動(dòng)句子結(jié)構(gòu)。但是以人作為主語(yǔ)的英語(yǔ)句子總是不能夠很吸引人,所以這個(gè)句子如果稍微做下修改,以后面的賓語(yǔ)“主意”做主語(yǔ),這個(gè)句子會(huì)發(fā)生一些變化。
An idea suddenly occurred to her.
2. 他開(kāi)車心不在焉,幾乎闖禍。
He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.
這句話依然是拿人做主語(yǔ),稍微改一下,把心不在焉這個(gè)形容詞的名詞形式做主語(yǔ),會(huì)大不相同。
His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.
3. 美利堅(jiān)合眾國(guó)創(chuàng)立于1789年。
The United States of America was founded in 1789.
這句話沒(méi)有任何錯(cuò)誤,但是不夠多樣,可以用時(shí)間作主語(yǔ)。
The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.
III 實(shí)用句型
在文章的最后,朗閣海外考試研究中心為大家列舉幾個(gè)新托福考試中可以使用的套用句型,為一些寫(xiě)句子摸不著頭緒的考生提供幫助。
1. It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.
努力準(zhǔn)備新托??荚囀侵档玫?。
2. Nothing is more important than to receive education.
沒(méi)有比接受教育更重要的了。
3. The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.
白領(lǐng)壓力日益增加的原因是他們?cè)谑聵I(yè)上有所追求。
4. It is time the related department took proper measures.
(虛擬句式)相關(guān)部門(mén)早該采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧┝恕?/p>
一篇好的文章是由一個(gè)個(gè)句子堆砌起來(lái)的,在托福寫(xiě)作考試?yán)锊粌H僅體現(xiàn)了考生的語(yǔ)法用詞,還能體現(xiàn)考生對(duì)于題目的思路看法,以及對(duì)美國(guó)地道用語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用。