托福寫作怎樣表達(dá)更有"高級感"？
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小編：環(huán)球教育整理 489托福寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)比較高，在語言上的考察點也是非常多而雜，所以大家對于托?？荚囋谡Z言上的考察一定要有足夠的重視，尤其是一些常見的錯誤，大家更要注意予以避免。造句要做到準(zhǔn)確、多樣以及高分表達(dá)。下面小編和大家分享一下托福寫作如何表達(dá)才更有高級感？更能獲得考官的青睞？一起來看。
I 準(zhǔn)確的句子表達(dá)
1. 句型分析
英語的句型包括以下幾種，簡單句、復(fù)合句、并列句、并列復(fù)合句等。在托福寫作中，一般使用復(fù)合句，輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句，當(dāng)然肯定要有簡單句，做到長短句相結(jié)合。下面摘抄幾個句子給大家認(rèn)識并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
這句話是一個復(fù)合句，由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。
b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
這句話中是一個復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中，有一個that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句對result進行解釋說明。
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句話是一個并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個句子，是一個并列句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。
d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
這句話同樣是并列復(fù)雜句。由and連接兩個句子，成為并列句，再一個which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。
2. 有問題的句子的列舉
考生寫的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個問題：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接連句，三是句子連接不正確。
1). 破碎句
所謂破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是沒有謂語(或者說謂語是動詞的非謂語形式，如分詞)，或者是從句單獨成句。
破碎句：She singing alone. (無謂語，singing是現(xiàn)在分詞)
正確句：She is singing alone.
破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨成句)
正確句：He did not come because he was sick.
2).接連句
所謂接連據(jù)，就是兩個句子直接連在一起，既未使用連詞，也未使用正確的標(biāo)點符號。
接連句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3).句子連接不正確
所謂句子連接不正確，就是兩個獨立的句子之間以逗號連接，這是不合英語語法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號、冒號、句號等連接兩個句子。
