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小編:天空 600句子結(jié)構(gòu)是雅思寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)“語(yǔ)法的多樣性與準(zhǔn)確度”中一項(xiàng)十分重要的考量因素,但這并不意味著要求考生具備寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)難句的能力。在追求輸出像雅思閱讀一樣精到的語(yǔ)言之前,我們首先要確保的應(yīng)當(dāng)是寫(xiě)出來(lái)的句子是正確的。有效的句子甚而段落通常應(yīng)當(dāng)同時(shí)滿足以下4個(gè)要素:一致、連貫、簡(jiǎn)潔、強(qiáng)調(diào)。
1. 一致:如句內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系,注意檢查是否存在簡(jiǎn)單推論、邏輯殘缺、邏輯悖論、依賴偏見(jiàn)等。
Born in a small town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be afamous musician.
→ He was born in a small town in South China in the early 1950s. In hischildhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970she became a famous musician.
2. 連貫:這個(gè)問(wèn)題在平行結(jié)構(gòu)、共用主語(yǔ)、使用指代的情況下尤其需要注意。
We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.
→ We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.
Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable youngwoman.
He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.
→ He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured.
Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye canreach.
→ Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far asthe eye can reach.
Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye canreach.
He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.
→ He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting.
Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobodybelieved.
3. 簡(jiǎn)潔:英美文化推崇坦率和直接,通常不需要體現(xiàn)咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。
It was small in size and blue in colour.
→ It was small and blue.
He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France.
→ He prefers French wines.
4. 強(qiáng)調(diào):正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea),每個(gè)段落都要有主題句(topicsentence)一般,每個(gè)句子都要圍繞一個(gè)中心觀點(diǎn)清晰地呈現(xiàn)出作者想要表現(xiàn)的重點(diǎn)。
He is modest and hardworking and is a good student.
→ He is a good student, modest and hardworking.
There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple.
→ In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 yearsold.
At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad wouldbe possible.
→ The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew thatsomething bad would happen.
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