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雅思7分大作文范文 :城市功能分區(qū)好嗎?
In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
本題是2010年8月28日的舊題翻版,有的烤鴨表示看到這個(gè)題目整個(gè)人都不好了,連寫都不想寫了!
為什么會(huì)如此呢?唐老師認(rèn)為,主要原因可能是多數(shù)烤鴨對(duì)這個(gè)話題不熟悉,看到題目就發(fā)懵了。但是,如果認(rèn)真審一下題目,我們就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),本題涉及的內(nèi)容其實(shí)與我們的生活緊密相關(guān)。現(xiàn)在的城市有一種傾向,即把相同功能的單位集中在一起,比如我們有電腦城、大學(xué)城、商業(yè)區(qū)、住宿區(qū)等。那么,這種趨勢(shì)是好還是壞呢?
好處
好處很明顯:相同功能單位相互交流變得容易,我們?nèi)ふ疫@些單位也變得容易,因此城市功能分區(qū)有助于提高我們的工作效率和生活質(zhì)量。
壞處
但壞處也很明顯:如果我們家庭周圍沒(méi)有學(xué)?;蛘哔?gòu)物中心,那就會(huì)給我們的日常生活造成困擾。因此,我們可以得出這么一個(gè)結(jié)論:那些我們僅偶爾打交道的單位可以集中在某個(gè)特定地方,并與其他地方分開(kāi),但那些與我們?nèi)粘I钕⑾⑾嚓P(guān)的機(jī)構(gòu),則應(yīng)該均勻分布在我們生活的地方,不宜分開(kāi)。
本題思維的核心是:把題目觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行拆分,然后分別討論不同情況的優(yōu)劣。
老師筆記
01.Modern city planners tend to separate a city into different areas according to their functions, such as the university area, business area, hospital area, residentialarea and so on. While this practice does bring about positive effects on our life, it may also create many problems.
現(xiàn)代城市規(guī)劃者傾向于根據(jù)城市的功能,將城市劃分為不同的區(qū)域,如大學(xué)區(qū)、商業(yè)區(qū)、醫(yī)院區(qū)、居住區(qū)等。雖然這種做法的確給我們的生活帶來(lái)積極影響,但也可能產(chǎn)生很多問(wèn)題。
解析:(1)separate 分隔;分開(kāi)的.(2)residential 居住的;居民的.(3)positive 積極的
02.A city arranged on the basis of clearly-defined functional areas can make our life a lot easier and more efficient. When we want to buy a specific model of computer, for example, we can simply visit the city’s hi-tech market without having torummage every corner of the city. For another example, if all government offices are located in the same area, then we will save tremendous amount of time when we need to get our bureaucratic paper work completed.
一個(gè)基于明確定位的功能分區(qū)的城市能使我們的生活更輕松、更有效。比如,當(dāng)我們想買一個(gè)特定型號(hào)的計(jì)算機(jī),我們可以訪問(wèn)城市的高科技市場(chǎng),而沒(méi)有必要搜尋城市的每個(gè)角落。再如,如果所有政府機(jī)關(guān)都位于同一地區(qū),那么當(dāng)我們需要完成各種官僚文書時(shí),就將節(jié)省大量的時(shí)間。
解析:(1)on the basis of 基于......(2)efficient 有效率的;(3)specific 特定的;(4)rummage 搜索;(5)bureaucratic 官樣的;程序性的.
03.However, this function-based city partitioning is not without problems, especially when we have to use a certain function every day, yet it is located somewhere far away from our home. Let us just suppose that all grocery stores were concentrated in the east end of the city and we lived in the west end. In that case, we would have to travel miles across the city every day to get our fresh fruits and vegetables.
然而,基于功能的城市劃分并不是沒(méi)有問(wèn)題,特別是當(dāng)我們每天必須使用某個(gè)功能,而它又位于遠(yuǎn)離我們家的某個(gè)地方時(shí)。讓我們來(lái)想象一下:所有的雜貨店都集中在城市的東區(qū),我們住在西區(qū)。那樣的話,我們每天都得在城市里穿行數(shù)英里才能買到新鮮水果和蔬菜。
解析:(1) partitioning 區(qū)分;分開(kāi).(2) concentrate 集中.
04.In light of the above discussion, I would conclude that whether the functionaldivision of a city is desirable or not depends on what the functions are. For those functions we do not often require in life such as museums and high-tech centers, they should be kept away from us in specific locations, but for those every-day functions like schools and stores, they should be located among us.
根據(jù)以上討論,我認(rèn)為城市功能分區(qū)是否可取,這取決于功能是什么。對(duì)于那些我們生活中通常不需要的功能,如博物館和高科技中心,應(yīng)該讓它們坐落在特定的地點(diǎn),遠(yuǎn)離我們但對(duì)于那些每天需要的功能,比如學(xué)校和商店,它們應(yīng)位于我們中間。
解析:(1) in light of 根據(jù)......(2) division 分區(qū) (本文使用的替換詞匯包括separation; partitioning; division).(3) desirable 可取的.
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