雅思寫作中讓考官怒扣分的常見開頭
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小編：環(huán)球教育整理 713雅思寫作是一項(xiàng)比較難以提高的的項(xiàng)目，主要是由于詞匯語法和邏輯思維都有所差異，那么有哪些寫作方式是比較常見的錯(cuò)誤呢?下面小編就為大家介紹一下。
1.中式英文
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart floweropened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. Forexample, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always dobad things, he will get “baoying”.
2.觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
3.偏離主題
Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire thequalifications and quality essential to success through university education. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To havethese important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
4.語法錯(cuò)誤慘不忍睹
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punishparents too besides children is also should.
5.過分簡(jiǎn)單沒有重點(diǎn)
Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
