歡迎來到環(huán)球教育官方網(wǎng)站,來環(huán)球,去全球!
來源:環(huán)球 教育
小編:Ruth 334字數(shù),是雅思寫作的一個硬標準,很多中國考生都頭痛不知道該說些什么,導致字數(shù)不夠被扣分。通常雅思的小作文要求不少于150個字,大作文不少于250個字,小作文湊字數(shù)很容易,在細節(jié)方面多描述一些,數(shù)據(jù)多提一些,分分鐘搞定。而大作文可能相對難一些。字數(shù)不夠?環(huán)球小編幫你湊,現(xiàn)在集中注意力看下邊:
方法一:深入分析——Analyze Deeply。很多時候,字數(shù)不夠是因為無話可說,無話可說是因為觀點很少甚至沒有觀點。其實,我們并不需要太多的觀點,對一個觀點進行深入分析,也可以有很豐富的寫法。任何一個觀點都是可以分出層次的。只要我們能夠分出一二三點來,一個觀點就可以裂解為多個觀點,每個觀點寫幾句,字數(shù)就會有顯著上升。當然,在分割觀點的時候要注意前后的邏輯關系和界限,不要把幾個觀點混淆起來。
方法二:多個方面——Think in different aspects。很多時候同一件事情從不同的方面說就有不同的觀點。例如限制購買車輛,單獨寫出來是一件很簡單的事情,也不需要很多字數(shù);但是,如果從政府、上班族、汽車生產(chǎn)者、汽車銷售商等多個角度去考慮和落筆,文章就豐富了,字數(shù)也上去了。
方法三:正說反說——Divide into two sides。一個觀點,乃至一件事情,不論如何肯定都有正反兩個方面。這一方面是說一個事情肯定有利有弊,另一方面是說人們的態(tài)度也有支持和反對兩種。在寫作文的時候,如果能夠注意支持一面的同時,對立場相左的一方予以分析并進行反駁,則文章內容更加豐富,邏輯更加完整,字數(shù)也不用擔心。
最后,還有一個不是方法的方法,就是注意總結,很多烤鴨在寫最后的結論段的時候以為就是走個形式,空喊一下就完成。其實,總結段是應該回顧整個文章,然后強調自己的觀點的。在回顧整個文章的時候,要比主體段更簡略,更有側重,更加精煉。如果重視起總結的內容,文章不論從完整程度上還是字數(shù)上都會因此受益。
在此為加大家?guī)?strong>范文一篇,一起學習啦~~
Topic
You recently met a manager from a new company that opened in your town. After the meeting, he wrote to you, offering you a job in this new company. However, you want to stay in your present job. Write a letter to the manager, and include: thanks him for the offer, explain why you want to stay in the present job, recommend a friend to take the job in the new company.
Rewritten Sample writing:
My sincere apologies for the delay in my response, as I wished to consider your offer in detail.
First, I wish to express my gratitude for your generous offer, which was important to me, nevertheless after consideration I believe that I would prefer to stay in my current position.
As a structural engineer, the design of economical residential buildings to accommodate general people was a dream of my childhood, and presently I am very fortunate that I am able to fulfill my dreams. As a result, it would be my intention to remain with my present work.
At the same time, and this may be of interest to you, I would like to recommend a friend, Bob Gillett, who was a colleague of mine, to apply for the position that you offered me. He is specialized in environmental engineering and has ten years’ working experience. I believe he would be the perfect candidate for your company. I have also spoken with him in brief and you can contact him directly on 0432783157. I am sure he would be pleased to hear from you.
Thank you once more for your kind consideration and with best wishes.