雅思教育類9分范文推薦
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Some people believe that it is beneficial for children to spend time on TV, video and PC games, while some hold the opposite view. Talk about these two views and give your own opinion.
When it comes to whether children shall spend their spare time watching TV, video and playing PC games, people’s opinions diverse greatly. Some say it is basically a waste of children’s time, while others argue that children can benefit a lot from such activities.
It is firmly maintained by many parents and teachers that children’s main purpose is to pursue outstanding academic achievements at school. To beat their competitors, they must make the best use of every precious minute. Therefore, they can not afford to indulge themselves before the “idiot box” as TV or in playing the senseless virtual games. Moreover, watching TV and playing PC games are addictive for many poorly-disciplined children, consuming their interest in study and eroding their academic aspirations.
However, many other people hold different views, arguing that if properly guided and supervised, children can expand vision and knowledge as well as foster their creativity from those fun activities. There are many educational programs on TV such as Discovery which feed children extensive knowledge in science and arts. By sparking children’s interest and imagination in various topics, these programs are often more enlightening than textbooks. Furthermore, when playing PC games, children can foster a stronger sense of cooperation as well as competition, and sharpening their mind against possible risks in the real world. Last but not least, watching cartoons and science fiction movies definitely stimulates children’s imagination and creativity. Many youngsters have been inspired to come up with novel inventions of become engineering elites in later life exactly with the inspirations from those sources.
From the above discussion, it is evident that if children can balance their study and fun time properly, watching TV, video programs and playing PC games will unquestionably bring them more benefits than harm. After all, books are not the only source of useful knowledge; in order to grow healthily in modern times, children need to accumulate knowledge and skills from various channels, and suitable time for relaxation and inspiration is surely more welcome than not.
Useful Phrases
1. a waste of (time / energy): 對（時間/精力）的浪費
2. benefit from: v. 從…中獲益
benefit: n.利益，收益 gain benefits from =benefit from,
Something brings benefits to somebody
beneficial: a. 對…有益的 something is beneficial to somebody.某事對某人有益
beneficiary: n. 受益人 somebody is the beneficiary of something. 某人從某事中獲益
3. make the best use of：充分利用
4. afford to do: 能夠承擔做某事
5. addictive: a. 使人上癮的, something is addictive to somebody
addicted: a. 上癮的, somebody is addicted to something
6. educational programs: 教育節(jié)目
7. enlightening: a. 具有啟發(fā)性的
8. last but not least: 最后
9. science fiction movies: 科幻電影
10. stimulate / trigger / inspire / enhance: 刺激、促進
Advanced Phrases
1. pursue outstanding academic achievements: 追求杰出的學術(shù)成績
2. indulge oneself in: 沉迷于
3. idiot box: 指電視
4. expand vision and knowledge：拓展視野和知識
5. feed children extensive knowledge in (science)：使兒童充分吸收（科學）知識
6. foster their creativity / a sense of cooperation：培養(yǎng)創(chuàng)造力/合作精神
7. come up with inventions / new ideas：做出發(fā)明/產(chǎn)生新想法
8. spark children’s interest and imagination：激發(fā)兒童的興趣和想象力
9. sharpen the mind: 使頭腦敏銳
10. accumulate knowledge and skills from various channels：通過多種渠道積累知識和技能
Useful Sentences
1. When it comes to…people’s opinions diverse greatly. 當談到…時，人們的看法有很大差別
e.g. When it comes to the use of nuclear power, people’s opinions diverse greatly.
例：當談到核能利用時，人們的看法有很大差別。
2. Some say it is basically a waste of children’s time, while others argue that…一些人認為這基本上就是浪費兒童的時間，而另外一些人則認為…
e.g. Some say it is not a fundamental responsibility of the government to patronize arts, while others argue that it is a promotion of humanity.
例：一些人認為對藝術(shù)的贊助并不是政府的基本職能，而另外一些人則認為這是對人性的提升。
3. To / In order to beat their competitors, they must make the best use of every precious minute.為了打敗競爭者，他們必須充分利用每一分每一秒。
e.g. To / In order to protect young people’s basic education rights, we must equally offer opportunities of secondary schooling to the public.
例：為了保護年輕人基本的受教育權(quán)，我們必須公平的向公眾提供接受中學教育的機會
4. It is firmly maintained that…（人們）堅定地認為
e.g. It is firmly maintained that the preservation of wild life is one of the most pressing issues.
例：人們堅定地認為保護野生動物迫在眉睫。
It is firmly maintained that such regulations should be strictly observed.
例：人們堅定地認為這些規(guī)章應該嚴格遵守。
5. …is addictive to …, consuming their interest in … and eroding their aspirations for … 某物使人上癮，消磨他們對…的興趣和對…的渴望
e.g. Drinking is addictive to the majority of young people, consuming their interest in work and eroding their aspirations for life.
例：對大部分年輕人來說，喝酒使人上癮，消磨他們對工作的興趣和對人生的渴望。
6. However, many other people hold different views, arguing that… 然而，很多人持不同看法，他們認為…
e.g. However, many other people hold different views, arguing that the preservation of wild life is not a necessity.
例：然而，很多人持不同看法，他們認為保護野生動物勢在必行。
7. By sparking children’s interest and imagination in various topics, these programs are often more enlightening than textbooks. 通過激發(fā)兒童對不同領(lǐng)域的興趣和想象力，這些節(jié)目往往比教科書更具啟發(fā)性。
e.g. By use renewable energy, people are trying to find a solution to environmental problems.
例：通過使用可再生能源，人們試圖解決環(huán)境問題。
8. If / Once + 過去分詞/介詞短語, somebody / something … 如果/一旦…
e.g. If wrongly used, nuclear energy can be a destructive force.
例：如果使用不當，核能會成為毀滅性力量。
Once in an urgent situation, people can demonstrate tremendous potential.
一旦遇到緊急狀況，人們會表現(xiàn)出巨大的潛力。
9. From the above discussion, it is evident that… 從以上討論可以明顯看出…
e.g. From the above discussion, it is evident that many employees are apathetic about management policies.
例：從以上討論可以明顯看出員工對于管理政策漠不關(guān)心。
10. …is surely more welcome than not. …肯定是受歡迎的
e.g. Accuracy of details is surely more welcome than not for policy makers.
例：準確的細節(jié)無疑是受到政策制定者歡迎的。
