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小編:白洋 323小編為考生們介紹中國學生最常用也是最常錯的10個連接詞和表達,希望考生們在雅思作文中避免此類錯誤出現(xiàn)。
雅思表達常見錯誤1:on the other hand一般引導對比的東西,不等于besides, furthermore, secondly
例子:Many young people enjoy online shopping. on the one hand, it saves time.On the other hand, it saves money.
評講:save time和save money 是兩個并列的有點,沒有對比的關系,最好用firstly, secondly。
雅思表達常見錯誤2:on the contrary以為是In contrast的替換詞
例子:The birth rate rose. On the contrary, the infant mortatality ratedropped.
評講:on the contrary 一般出現(xiàn)的語境是前面出現(xiàn)否定信息。這個詞組基本上不用于雅思作文。
雅思表達常見錯誤3:while, whereas認為是in contrast的替換詞
例子:The birth rate rose. While the infant mortatality rate dropped.
評講:while 是從屬連詞,要連接兩個獨立的句子,這里應該是“,while”或者改成“in contrast”
雅思表達常見錯誤4:besides, furthermore, what’s more, moreover, inaddition被認為是“遞進”的連接詞
例子:Many people today choose to study in foreign countries. Besides, theycan gain qualifications in foreign universities.
評講:besides一般引導兩個并列的觀點,不指代因果關系,這里應該是“because ofthis”比較合理。很有意思的是,有一次我上課問學生什么是“遞進”,舉個中文的例子給我看,竟然沒有學生能夠舉出恰當的中文例子??梢姾芏鄬W生學習都是人云亦云,對一些概念其實根本不理解。
雅思表達常見錯誤5:however被認為是on the other hand的同義詞
例子:Working from home has benefited many people. However, it can causeproblems.
評講:however一般是轉折關系,也就是后面的句子意思往往代表作者的首要立場。而on the otherhand一般是并列關系,也就是前后句子或者觀點沒有輕重之分,是并列的,一般是兩個事情的對比,而不是轉折。
雅思表達常見錯誤6:by doing this, in this way被認為是as a result, therefore, as aconsequence 等
例子:Many people work long hours. By doing this, they may suffer poorhealth.
評講:一般by doing this, in thisway都是用在人們有計劃地做某個事情,最后為了達到一定目的,或者效果。那么,顯然不可能后面出現(xiàn)不好的結果,譬如說poor health。因此在這里用as aresult最好。
雅思表達常見錯誤7:as a result, therefore, thus, as a consequence 都是連接詞,而不是連詞
例子:many people today prefer to use mobile phones to communicate with theirfriends, as a result, the face-to-face contact declines.
評講:as a result類似于副詞,沒有連詞的功能,所以前面要用句號或者;號
雅思表達常見錯誤8:thereby 不是therefore的替換詞
例子:Many libraries have Internet connection now, thereby, people can doresearch online.
評講:thereby的習慣用法是thereby+doing something, 不能違反這個規(guī)則,千萬不要以為thereby用了比therefore高大上
雅思表達常見錯誤9:in order to 一般是表示有目的地去做某個事情,要注意邏輯主語,而且一般不會用否定
例子:Governments should not invest in the arts, in order to save money.
評講:這個句子用否定讀起來很不通順,用governments should cut down on the spending on the arts,in order to save money.
雅思表達常見錯誤10:with如果加名詞,往往是表示“有了…”,后面一般不加負面的東西
例子:With pollution, many people will have health problems.
評講:pollution是不好的東西,用with很怪異,用because of好一點