雅思劍13時(shí)代 哪種大作文結(jié)構(gòu)適合你？
來源：環(huán)球教育
小編：長安 332雅思考試隨著《劍13》的出版又步入了一個(gè)新的階段，但面對(duì)雅思大作文，學(xué)生們總是有說不出的憂愁，比如“我到底應(yīng)該寫幾段？”成為了課堂討論的問題。
今天，北京環(huán)球教育陳夢潔老師在這里給大家介紹兩種雅思考官們常用的段落結(jié)構(gòu)：即4段式和5段式。
一、4段式
這種文體結(jié)構(gòu)如下：
4段論結(jié)構(gòu)中的第二段和第三段內(nèi)容可以互換，即可以先寫讓步段，再寫支持觀點(diǎn)段落。這種結(jié)構(gòu)適合在短時(shí)間內(nèi)可以想到很多觀點(diǎn)，但不擅長展開論證的學(xué)生使用。在官方給出的范文中，C5T2的task2就是一個(gè)很好的例子。
題目：
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
范文：
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. This trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.
The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.
However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.
My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.
二、5段式
這種文體的結(jié)構(gòu)如下：
5段式中也可以把讓步段寫在第二段，第三段和第四段寫支持觀點(diǎn)的分論點(diǎn)。這種結(jié)構(gòu)適合想不出太多觀點(diǎn)，但能夠?qū)?個(gè)或兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行深入論證的同學(xué)。這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)在官方范文里同樣可以找到很多例子，如C9T3的task2。
題目：
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
范文：
A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend. One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle.
Advocates of this believe that today's sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening, The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.
However, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. Interest in sport is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them. Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.
As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health. Even improving public transport would help it takes longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.
In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results. People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.
以上給大家介紹的兩種大作文結(jié)構(gòu)本質(zhì)上沒有高低之分，采取哪種寫法主要根據(jù)學(xué)生自身的情況而定。當(dāng)然，在掌握結(jié)構(gòu)的同時(shí)，學(xué)生也應(yīng)該通過多加練習(xí)來提升自己的寫作能力。
