雅思寫(xiě)作7分句評(píng)析
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小編： 17下面這些句子是雅思基礎(chǔ)班語(yǔ)法課的作業(yè)，所選句子全部來(lái)自于雅思高分作文(7分水平以上)，對(duì)于其它雅思班的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)也可以當(dāng)作一個(gè)很好的參考，看看下面這些句子你的表達(dá)和這里提供的model answer是否一致，如果基本一致的話，恭喜你！說(shuō)明你的雅思寫(xiě)作水平已經(jīng)達(dá)到7分的水準(zhǔn)啦！
1. 一個(gè)人的實(shí)際能力才是企業(yè)所真正看重的。
It is one's practical capability that enterprises truly value.
(這句話用強(qiáng)調(diào)句句型表達(dá)效果比較好。)
2. 我認(rèn)為我們發(fā)明一種新的語(yǔ)言來(lái)取代英語(yǔ)是沒(méi)有必要的.
I don't think it necessary to invent a new kind of language to take the place of English.
（這句話有太多的同學(xué)用"instead of"來(lái)表示“取代”的意思，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)，instead of是介詞詞組，表示"......而不是......"的意思。）
3. 然而，關(guān)于它是一件好事還是壞事，人們有不同的態(tài)度。
People, nevertheless, hold various opinions in terms of the issue whether it is a blessing or a curse.（這句話有很多人用"good thing"和"bad thing"表示“好事”和“壞事”，在書(shū)面語(yǔ)中推薦用blessing和curse，絕對(duì)的less common vocabulary!）
4. 很多國(guó)家的失業(yè)率在不斷攀升這一事實(shí)是我們無(wú)法否認(rèn)的。
The fact that the unemployment rates in quite a number of countries keep rising can not be denied.
5. 在給出我的觀點(diǎn)之前，我認(rèn)為看一看問(wèn)題的兩面是很重要的。
I hold it essential to examine the both sides of the issue before presenting my viewpoint.（這句話有幾個(gè)重點(diǎn)：首先表示“看一看”不宜用"look at"，那是“盯著...看”的意思，examine是“仔細(xì)審視”的意思，用
在這里正合適。“問(wèn)題”在這里應(yīng)該用issue而不是problem，因?yàn)閜roblem相當(dāng)于trouble，一定是負(fù)面的。Issue表示“有爭(zhēng)議的問(wèn)題”，大家記住，雅思作文里討論的話題絕大多數(shù)都屬于issue。此外，present屬于less common vocabulary,是“give”的升級(jí)版。）
6. 不同的人們對(duì)于全球化是否有利于經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展這個(gè)問(wèn)題持有不同的看法.
Different people hold various viewpoints as to the issue whether globalization is beneficial to the economic development.
7. 令人感到遺憾的是大多數(shù)人所在乎的僅僅就只是他們?cè)趺礃硬拍芨嗟刭嵉藉X(qián)。
It is a pity that all the majority of people care about is how they could be paid more.
8. 隨著越來(lái)越多的婦女參與全職工作，由誰(shuí)來(lái)照顧孩子已經(jīng)成為了社會(huì)上的一個(gè)問(wèn)題。
With increasing number of women taking part in full-time jobs, who should take care of children has become a social issue.(注意with引導(dǎo)的成分名詞后面必須跟動(dòng)詞的ing形式，很多同學(xué)這一題一上來(lái)就寫(xiě)"With more and more women take part in full-time job"是錯(cuò)誤的。)
第二單元：定語(yǔ)從句
1. (Letter) 我們這次還是約在上次一起吃晚飯的餐廳見(jiàn)面吧！
Let’s meet at the restaurant where we had dinner together last time!
2. ( 寫(xiě)作) 環(huán)境保護(hù)是一個(gè)如今為人們廣為討論的一個(gè)話題。
The environmental protection is a topic (which is) widely discussed by people nowadays.
3. ( 寫(xiě)作) 我們必須承認(rèn)，那些反對(duì)此觀點(diǎn)的人們也有一定的道理。
Admittedly, those who oppose to the viewpoint also have their reasons to a certain extent.
4. ( 寫(xiě)作) 人們往往會(huì)和觀念與自己相近的人交朋友。
People tend to make friends with those people whose viewpoints are similar to their own.
People tend to make friends with those who share similar viewpoints to their own.
5. ( 寫(xiě)作) 手提電腦如今如此普及的一個(gè)重要原因就是它的使用方便。
A major reason why lap-tops are so popular nowadays is that it is easy to use.
6.( 口語(yǔ)) 我計(jì)劃于2010年回國(guó)，到那時(shí)候我將年滿30歲。
I am planning to come back in 2010, by which time (when) I will be 30.
7. ( 口語(yǔ)) 《荷馬史詩(shī)》是一本很精彩的書(shū)，我從中學(xué)到了很多。*
Homer Epic is a wonderful book, from which I have learned a lot.
8. ( 口語(yǔ)) 最激動(dòng)人心的一次旅行經(jīng)歷是在巴厘島，在那里我有生以來(lái)第一次體驗(yàn)了潛水。
The most exciting traveling experience for me is the one in Bali, where I experienced diving for the first time in my life.
9. ( 口語(yǔ)) 我父母一共生了三個(gè)孩子，我是其中最大的。
My parents have three children, among whom I am the eldest.
10. ( 口語(yǔ)) David和我住在一個(gè)寢室已經(jīng)兩年了，他是一個(gè)非常搞笑的家伙。
David, with whom I have been sharing a dorm for 2 years, is quite a funny guy.
David, who is quite a funny guy, has been sharing a dorm with me for 2 years.
