易犯的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（1）
來(lái)源：
小編： 31易犯的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（1）
來(lái)源：環(huán)球教育網(wǎng) www.ielts.com.cn
2005-4-28
1 . Sentence fragments
Make sure each word group you have punctuated as a sentence contains a grammatically complete and independent thought that can stand alone as an acceptable sentence.
我經(jīng)?？吹骄渥映煞植蝗蛘邇蓚€(gè)句子不加任何連詞的用在一起的情況，出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因有兩個(gè)：
1是句子太長(zhǎng)，把作者自己搞暈了
2是有些人還不清楚兩個(gè)完整的句子不能排在一起而不加任何連詞。
還有一種情況是一個(gè)完整的單句帶有有連詞，卻沒(méi)有主句?；蛘邔⒁粋€(gè)主從句斷裂開(kāi)了。第二個(gè)例句就是此類(lèi)。
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Sentence Fragment
Tests of the Shroud of Turin have produced some curious findings. For example, the pollen of forty-eight plants native to Europe and the Middle East.
[2nd sentence = fragment]
改正：
Tests of the Shroud of Turin have produced some curious findings. For example, the cloth contains the pollen of forty-eight plants native to Europe and the Middle East.
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原句：
Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption. Although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals.
改正：
[2nd sentence = fragment]
Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption, although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals.
2. Sentence sprawl
Too many equally weighted phrases and clauses produce tiresome sentences.
過(guò)尤不及，雖然我們強(qiáng)調(diào)句子要有一定的復(fù)雜性，但是實(shí)際上老米教授、專(zhuān)家從來(lái)不主張過(guò)長(zhǎng)的句子，讀者也不愛(ài)看。不過(guò)，要達(dá)到精確而又不?