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小編:天空 1336實際上,雅思大作文的第一段是情景鋪墊,專家建議考生在這一段要點明這篇文章要討論和解決什么問題及問題的背景。作文的首段通常包含以下幾個方面:
?、賵鼍盎虮尘靶畔?,即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon。
?、谝恍﹦e人的觀點(some people's opinion),這一部分在改寫文章首段時可要可不要,考生按照自己的情況來安排。
?、蹅€人觀點,這一部分在有些文章的開首段中也可以不要。
大作文要求字數(shù)至少達到250字,在寫作中考慮到字數(shù)的合理安排,第一段最好寫3-5句話,大約40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說完。因此大作文開首方式通常有以下幾種情況:
①題目中包含了背景信息
有時也出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,并且題目中字數(shù)較多。這種情況下最保險的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及一些人的觀點重新表達(paraphrase),可以做:
主動語態(tài)<=>被動語態(tài)
主謂賓<=>主系表
某些近義詞互換
Example:
At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?
The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的觀點即可。
②題目中包含了背景信息,有時出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,但題目中字數(shù)較少,若直接重新表達,字數(shù)湊不到40字左右。這種情況下推薦以下2種開首方式來保證字數(shù):
把籠統(tǒng)信息細節(jié)化即通過舉例來解釋說明題目中的背景信息。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture。其后加入考生個人觀點即可。
追溯歷史,過去與現(xiàn)在形成對比。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry. 其后加入考生個人觀點即可。
?、垲}目中僅出現(xiàn)一部分人的觀點,而沒有背景信息。這種情況下,我們可以根據(jù)這部分人的觀點所涉及的信息在開首段附加對背景信息的描述。
Example:
The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?
In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生個人觀點即可。
另外,要提醒考生注意的是作文首段一定要避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤,如果因為語法錯誤影響文章的理解,那會給考官留下極差的第一印象,而考官也就沒有信心繼續(xù)往下讀了,最終大作文的得分自然不會很高。
下面為各位考生整理了一些雅思大作文開頭,供大家參考:
1、利用形式主語做開頭
A、When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
B、It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.
when it comes to 。。。句型后面加要闡述的topic
it is commonly/widely thought that ....直接加現(xiàn)象 同there is 。。。句型
2、以人做主語描述個人觀點和態(tài)度
A、Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin.
B、A large number of people tend to live under the * that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling.
C、People differ in their attitudes towards failure. Faced with it, some of them can stand up to it, draw useful lessons from it and try hard to fulfill what they are determined to do. Others, however, lose heart and give in.
3、現(xiàn)象本身作主語
A、Whether a large family is a good thing or not is a very popular topic, which is often talked about not only by city residents but by farmers as well
4、 開頭萬能公式一:名人名言
有人問了,“我沒有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語名言?”,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦!而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢!對吧?
經(jīng)典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (適用于已記住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (適用于自編名言)
更多經(jīng)典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
5、開頭萬能公式二:數(shù)字統(tǒng)計
原理:要想更有說服力,就應(yīng)該用實際的數(shù)字來說明。
原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起來這個數(shù)字文鄒鄒的,其實都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造:
Honesty
根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示,大學(xué)生向老師請假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。
Youth
根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示,在某個大學(xué),學(xué)生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
看了以上這些雅思大作文開頭你是否有所感悟?這只是一小部分,更多的技巧和寫法大家在備考的時候可以多多參照高分作文,看看別人是怎么寫的,取其精華去其糟泊,爭取讓自己的寫作水平有所提高。
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